Am I only treasure you can collect by accident
for those rainy days when there’s nothing to do
so you can recollect a time when you were crazy
driving 90 on a 30 stretch, not even slowing down
for speed bumps, you’re a drive by, a killing with no exit.
My eyes light up when it sees your name
I want to sing when I hear your melody
walking through my burning thoroughfare
lights me up when you do anything.
COCOYEA 
Such interesting emotions in this poem…almost like feeling you’re being used by someone else…thanks for sharing your poem.
Thanks for stopping by.
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i agree with slpmartin about the emotions felt through.
i am still working a bit on connecting the two parts
i love the first stanza, not only for it reminds me my self a long, long time ago, but because of that feeling it shows and in return evokes in me.
Yeah I think the second stanza is a whole new poem. Thanks for reading.
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it is my pleasure
(i do sometimes miss your replies with your way of doing them, i should be more careful next)
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I should just use the reply :-).
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🙂
not necessary
perhaps it is just me
but i like to check My Comments story here in wordpress and see..
good night
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Ahh, love song. and an electric one too. I hope the intended recipient liked it, that is the only true test of a love song.
Thank you Paul.
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fabulous energy cocoyea. such awkward and genuine love
Thanks.
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the two stanzas def have a different feel and energy but i can’t decide which one i like better — the stinging hurt or the deep passion. i really like the second to last line. pretty.
Thank you Lissa.
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